XIANGYU LIU
147-37 ROOSEVELT AVE 1A
FLUSHING, N.Y 11354
Phone: 347-399-0968 e-mail: xiangyuliu818@yahoo.com
New York Hospital Queen
Human Resources
56-45 Main Street
Flushing, N.Y. 11355
Dear Dr. Burns
It lights my eyes when I read you New York Hospital Queen hiring researchers in the Lang Research Center. I will have my associate degree on July 2010, major in math and science in LaGuardia Community College.
I have great experience in laboratory experiences. During my school years, I took science classes such as chemistry and biology every semester and we did many experiments in labs, so I am familiar with performing experiments.
I look forward to our meeting and discussion regarding my abilities and contributions to fit the position.
Sincerely
XiangYu Liu
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I Like your cover letter. I think it will definitely catch an employer eye. Your cover letter is short and clear. It covers your educational and professional experience very compact and informative.
ReplyDeleteThe only thing i am not sure about it is your first sentence. It is sound to me little romantic and not as professional.
I think your cover letter is pretty good. It is short, clear and concrete. I have to say that I do agree with the ^ "Dragonfly opinion concerning first=opening sentence. It is a little bit weird and might do some damage.I think you should stick to the details and be as concrete as possible.
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